I’m building a nice collection of sticky notes on the paper ms. and comments in the electronic file, flagging places to expand, add scenes, and otherwise do higher-level revisions after this pass. I have not yet run amok with the pink highligher, but I have it handy.

I wanted to get through the first level of edits by the end of this weekend, and it looks like I’ll make it. As soon as I finish this pass, I will start in on the flagged spots.

Pass the Easter candy.